It's been awhile!
by Asp3nXx
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Woah, guys. It has been a LONG time since I've been around here. Okay, so, I'm back, and I'm here for the week. I'll try to keep up writing this year, but I can't make any promises. I'm in the 10th grade now and I started my stories when I was in 8th grade. My stories... They seem rather Mary Sue to me and I'm not quite sure if I want to actually continue them.
I believe that I am going to continue working on my Kingdom Hearts: To Dream in Valor series. I've drafted chapter 12 but I am pretty sure that I am going to completely rewrite bits and pieces of the series. I'm rather displeased with it, since it is such an old story with such.. an elementary storyline.. Meh. Xaroval is going to remain the main protagonist but I am planning on making the rivalry between she and Roxas more intense and better scripted with more details as to of why he displays such negative feelings towards her.
As I had said, I QUITE displeased with this story as a whole. There is NOT enough detail. There is NOT enough substance. It seems like more of a skeleton to a story rather than an actual final copy. I may or may not resume it. I may or may not completely rewrite it. I may or may not just add on to old chapters to make them seem more realistic. They need substance. They need meat on their bones.
If I continue TDIV, I am planning on adding illustrations to the chapters. I'm not sure if I will, considering the fact that I am a busy artist as it is, and I am driven more emotionally to draw rather than 'oh, this needs a drawing to go with it so I'm gonna do one'.. Meh. I'm rambling at this point. So I might as well depart and return when I get home to a silent environment so that I can focus enough to write. Alrighty. So.
Au revoir.
-Asp3nXx
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