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Our Fate ★
by Marrionete
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(You) Erica (Him) Miguel
Description
He is very obnoxious
He is very stupid
He is very careless
Yet
I love him so..............
Foreword
He is very obnoxious
He is very stupid
He is very careless
Yet
I love him so..............
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Meet Erica, your typical highschool girl. Kind but she sometimes have her usual moodswings. Everything was going smoothly until she met Mr. Obnoxious Miguel. Both didn't start that good, but will later realize their feelings for each other. Will they be together? Or will fate would love to play with them?
Characters:
Erica Tizon, a simple girl who loves playing pranks. Very playful, cheerful and caring to her friends. Erica is also hardworking believing, 'If you set your eyes on something you'll do everything to get it. Her life was peaceful until she met Mr. Obnoxious Miguel, both didn't have a good start but they'll realize something later.
Kim Miguel, a half Korean guy. Everyone loves him, because he is rich, handsome, and popular. Everyone wants to be his friend. But he is very annoying, super annoying and good at having debates even when he is wrong he can prove his point, 'I'm always right so you have to listen!' is what he always say. But he'll change meeting Erica. And something starts to blossom.
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Please do not plagiarize this story since I had a hard time thinking of this, got the idea from She's Dating The Gangster!
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officiaLinspirit on says:
Hello, hello ^^ I saw your ad on my wall and decided to read this~ May I give you my advice? You don't have to change anything so don't feel pressured, okay? So... desciptions is basically a short synopsis for the story; right now yours... is (no offense) somewhat uninteresting. It doesn't tell me anything about the conflict at all, so try rewording it (you can tell me a little bit about the story and I will try to help you if you want, but ONLY if you want. Again, no pressure). Also, for ellipses (...), there should only be three. It shouldn't look like '............' That isn't grammatically correct.
As for the foreword, it should be what inspired you to write out this fic and yada yada yada. I highly reccommend you take the character chart (the character's descriptions) out because it defeats the purpose of writing out the story. You don't see published authors spoon-feeding their readers exactly who the characters are, and what happens to them, right? Let the readers figure it out as they go through the story.
Just some advice for you. I hope you don't take it as anything offensive. :)
loveless on says:
Update soon! ^^
BlondeAsianPeople on says:
Nice plot! Update soon ^^
Panda_Bear on says:
Waiting for your story ^^
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