An Extinction of Flawed Characters

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This is a chapter I posted in my beta shop over at AFF hence the reference in the introduction. If you want you can check me out there. I am under the same username.

Okay, so here’s the deal: You’re bored. You’re sitting on your couch with a soft blanket hugging your body, flipping through the endless channels of monotonous shows. There’s nothing else to do but homework. But who the hell wants to do that, right?

You yawn. 

You’re not in the mood for those tear-jerking dramas nor the over exaggerated comedic shows so the channels keep changing. 

That all stops when a flash of green catches your eye and the remote falls, limp onto your lap. It’s the news channel and they’re showing your beloved website, Asianfanfics with a glowing red caption at the bottom of the screen. “Breaking News!” It reads, “Flawed Characters Have Officially Become an Endangered Species on AFF!”

And there you have it, my introduction to the first piece of writing advice I will give you. I’m lame, whatever. Shoot me.

But seriously, though. What happened to our flawed people? What is this ongoing infestation of Mary Sues and Gary Stus?

For those of you who don’t know (which should be none of you guys), a Mary Sue/Gary Stu is a character with no flaws, constantly acts like a goody-two-shoes, and hold a full-time job in stories as an obnoxious prick.

Allow me to be frank here. If your characters have no imperfections, then they don’t have depth. And if they don’t have depth then it screws up your story, and makes it very much worthy of being drowned in the pits of hell.

Haven’t you heard the phrase, “Real people aren’t perfect and perfect people aren’t real?” So why exactly are you making your characters perfect when the people living in you stories should be realistic? Let me give you an example: the “nerd girl.” I cringe just typing this out. What is a “nerd” exactly? In the avalanche of fanfics on this site, I’ve found them to be depicted as people who wear enormous, thick-lensed glasses who bury themselves in schoolwork, and may or may not be popular. 

As a person who wears glasses, I find this insulting.

But anyway, according to The Free Dictionary, a nerd is:
    1. A foolish, inept, or unattractive person.
    2. A person who is single-minded or accomplished in scientific or technical pursuits but is felt to be socially inept.

You don’t see anything about glasses on there, now do you?

Modern interpretations of “nerds,” are of people who obsess over grades and are socially outcasted. This means that those “nerds” in your stories cannot be well-liked. If they are, they aren’t nerds. Also, what is up with this concept of “When the nerd takes off her glasses, she suddenly becomes breathtakingly beautiful?” No. Please, no. 

Okay, enough of that. I want you guys to understand that I’m not bashing nerds. There’s nothing wrong with casting a nerd in your stories. However, at least give them some depth. Give them some imperfections. Don’t give them glasses. For instance, your so-called “nerd” (let’s make the character female) could be from a family that doesn’t give a damn about her. So day and night, she works hard, studying because it’s one of the few things she’s good at, vying for their attention and love. Over time, she deludes herself into believing that studying is fun and increases the time spent doing it. She becomes disinterested in people and so in turn, people became disinterested in her. And because of the lack of people around her, she doesn’t feel the loneliness of being alone. (Until, of course, someone enters her life and shit happens.)

So maybe that isn’t the best character, but at least there’s a reason why she’s so obsessed with studying. There’s depth. She’s too stubborn for her own good. That’s her flaw. 

Which begs the questions: How do you create a flawed character? One with depth? How do you create a realistic fictional person?

That’s easy (no, I’m kidding, it’s really not). I’m here to assist you on character creation. And what better way to hand you a handy dandy list of flaws I’ve lifted from Dark World RPG? 

Here they are:

• Absentminded- Preoccupied to the extent of being unaware of one's immediate surroundings. Abstracted, daydreaming, inattentive, oblivious, forgetful.

• Abusive- Characterized by improper infliction of physical or psychological maltreatment towards another.

• Alcoholic- A person who drinks alcoholic substances habitually and to excess or who suffers from alcoholism.

• Addict- One who is addicted, as to narcotics or a compulsive activity. (gambling, drugs, sex, etc. List specific addiction.)

• Aimless- Devoid of direction or purpose.

• Anxious- Full of mental distress or uneasiness because of fear of danger or misfortune; greatly worried; solicitous.

• Arrogant- Having or displaying a sense of overbearing self-worth or self-importance. Inclined to social exclusiveness and who rebuff the advances of people considered inferior. Snobbish.

• Audacious- Recklessly bold in defiance of convention, propriety, law, or the like; insolent; braze, disobedient.

• Bigmouth- A loudmouthed or gossipy person.

• Bigot- One who is strongly partial to one's own group, religion, race, or politics and is intolerant of those who differ.

• Blunt- Characterized by directness in manner or speech; without subtlety or evasion. Frank, callous, insensitive, brusque.

• Bold- In a bad sense, too forward; taking undue liberties; over assuming or confident; lacking proper modesty or restraint; rude; impudent. Abrupt, brazen, cheeky, brassy, audacious.

• Callous- They are hardened to emotions, rarely showing any form of it in expression. Unfeeling. Cold.

• Childish- Marked by or indicating a lack of maturity; puerile.

• Complex- An exaggerated or obsessive concern or fear. (List specific complex.)

• Cruel- Mean to anyone or anything, without care or regard to consequences and feelings.

• Cursed- A person who has befallen a prayer for evil or misfortune, placed under a spell, or borne into an evil circumstance, and suffers for it. Damned.

• Dependent- Unable to exist, sustain oneself, or act appropriately or normally without the assistance or direction of another.

• Deranged- Mentally decayed. Insane. Crazy. Mad. Psychotic.

• Disloyal- Lacking loyalty. Unfaithful, perfidious, traitorous, treasonable

• Disability- A disadvantage or deficiency, especially a physical or mental impairment that interferes with or prevents normal achievement in a particular area. (List the disability or disabilities. Exp blind, missing limbs, deaf, color blind, no sense of smell, etc)

• Disorder- An ailment that affects the function of mind or body. (List the disorders name if they have one.) Mental Disorder List.

• Disturbed- Showing some or a few signs or symptoms of mental or emotional illness. Confused, disordered, neurotic, troubled.

• Dubious- Fraught with uncertainty or doubt. Undecided, doubtful, unsure.

• Dyslexic- Affected by dyslexia, a learning disorder marked by impairment of the ability to recognize and comprehend written words.

• Egotistical- Characteristic of those having an inflated idea of their own importance. Boastful, pompous.

• Envious- Showing extreme cupidity; painfully desirous of another's advantages; covetous, jealous.

• Erratic- Deviating from the customary course in conduct or opinion; eccentric: erratic behavior. Eccentric, bizarre, outlandish, strange.

• Fanaticism- Fanatic outlook or behavior especially as exhibited by excessive enthusiasm, unreasoning zeal, or wild and extravagant notions on some subject.

• Fickle- Characterized by erratic changeableness or instability, especially with regard to affections or attachments; capricious.

• Fierce- Marked by extreme intensity of emotions or convictions; inclined to react violently; fervid; "fierce loyalty"; "in a tearing rage"; "vehement dislike"; "violent passions".

• Finicky- Excessively particular or fastidious; difficult to please; fussy. Too much concerned with detail. Meticulous, fastidious, choosy, critical, picky, prissy, persnickety.

• Fixation- In psychoanalytic theory, a strong attachment to a person or thing, especially such an attachment formed in childhood or infancy and manifested in immature or neurotic behavior that persists throughout life. Fetish, quirk, obsession, infatuation.

• Flirt-To make playfully romantic or sexual overtures; behavior intended to arouse sexual interest. Minx. Tease.

• Fools Love- A person who is always falling in love or believes they are in love, for the wrong person or even multiple people (usually one after another), and typically love at first sight. Star-crossed, ill-fated-love.

• Frail- Physically weak and easily broken or damaged. Having delicate health; not robust. Feeble, breakable, sickly, dainty, brittle, fallible, imperfect, weak.

• Fraudulent- Given to or using fraud, as a person; cheating; dishonest. Deceitful, deceptive, crooked, underhanded.

• Gluttonous- Given to excess in consumption of especially food or drink. Voracious, ravenous, wolfish, piggish, insatiable.

• Gruff-Brusque or stern in manner or appearance. Crusty, rough, surly.

• Gullible- Will believe any information given, regardless of how valid or truthful it is, easily deceived or duped.

• Habit- A rather revolting personal habit. (List habit- picks nose, spits tobacco everywhere, drools profusely, bad body odor, etc.)

• Hard- A person who is difficult to deal with, manage, control, overcome, or understand. Hard emotions, hard hearted.

• Hedonistic- Pursuit of or devotion to pleasure, especially to the pleasures of the senses.

• Hoity-toity- Given to flights of fancy; capricious; frivolous. Prone to giddy behavior, flighty.

• Humorless- The inability to find humor in things, and most certainly in themselves.

• Hypocritical- One who is always contradicting their own beliefs, actions or sayings. A person who professes beliefs and opinions for others that he does not hold. Being a hypocrite.

• Idealist- One whose conduct is influenced by ideals that often conflict with practical considerations. One who is unrealistic and impractical, guided more by ideals than by practical considerations.

• Idiotic- Marked by a lack of intelligence or care; foolish or careless.

• Ignorant- Lacking knowledge or information as to a particular subject or fact. Showing or arising from a lack of education or knowledge.

• Illiterate- Unable to read and write.

• Impatient- Unable to wait patiently or tolerate delay; restless. Unable to endure irritation or opposition; intolerant.

• Impious- Lacking piety and reverence for a god/gods and their followers.

• Incompetent- Unable to execute tasks, no matter how the size or difficulty.

• Indecisive- Characterized by lack of decision and firmness, especially under pressure.

• Indifferent- The trait of lacking enthusiasm for or interest in things generally, remaining calm and seeming not to care; a casual lack of concern. Having or showing little or no interest in anything; languid; spiritless.

• Infamy- Having an extremely bad reputation, public reproach, or strong condemnation as the result of a shameful, criminal, or outrageous act that affects how others view them.

• Intolerant- Unwilling to tolerate difference of opinion and narrow-minded about cherished opinions.

• Immature- Emotionally undeveloped; juvenile; childish.

• Impish- Naughtily or annoyingly playful.

• Judgmental- Inclined to make and form judgments, especially moral or personal ones, based on ones own opinions or impressions towards others/practices/groups/religions based on appearance, reputation, occupation, etc.

• Klutz- Clumsy. Blunderer.

• Lazy- Resistant to work or exertion; disposed to idleness.

• Lewd- Inclined to, characterized by, or inciting to lust or lechery; lascivious. Obscene or indecent, as language or songs; salacious.

• Liar- Compulsively and purposefully tells false truths more often than not. A person who has lied or who lies repeatedly.

• Lustful- Driven by lust; preoccupied with or exhibiting lustful desires.

• Masochist- The deriving of sexual gratification, or the tendency to derive sexual gratification, from being physically or emotionally abused. A willingness or tendency to subject oneself to unpleasant or trying experiences.

• Meddlesome- Intrusive in a meddling or offensive manner, given to meddling; interfering.

• Meek- Evidencing little spirit or courage; overly submissive or compliant; humble in spirit or manner; suggesting retiring mildness or even cowed submissiveness.

• Megalomaniac- A psycho pathological condition characterized by delusional fantasies of wealth, power, or omnipotence.

• Murderer- One guilty of murder; a person who unlawfully kills a human being. Killer, butchered, cutthroat.

• Naive- Lacking worldly experience and understanding, simple and guileless; showing or characterized by a lack of sophistication and critical judgment.

• Nervous- Easily agitated or distressed; high-strung or jumpy.

• Nonviolent- Abstaining from the use of violence. (can double as a merit)

• Nosey- Given to prying into the affairs of others; snoopy. Offensively curious or inquisitive.

• Obsessive- An unhealthy and compulsive preoccupation with something or someone.

• Oppressor- A person of authority who subjects others to undue pressures, to keep down by severe and unjust use of force or authority.

• Overambitious- Having a strong excessive desire for success or achievement.

• Overemotional- Excessively or abnormally emotional. Sensitive about themselves and others, more so than the average person.

• Overprotective- To protect too much; coddle.

• Overconfident- Excessively confident; presumptuous.

• Overzealous- Marked by excessive enthusiasm for and intense devotion to a cause or idea.

• Pacifist- Opposition to war or violence as a means of resolving disputes. (Can double as a merit in certain cases)

• Paranoid- Exhibiting or characterized by extreme and irrational fear or distrust of others.

• Peevish- Expressing fretfulness and discontent, or unjustifiable dissatisfaction. Cantankerous, cross, ill-tempered, testy, captious, discontented, crotchety, cranky, ornery.

• Pest- One that pesters or annoys, with or without realizing it. Nuisance. Annoying. Nag.

• Pessimist- A tendency to stress the negative or unfavorable or to take the gloomiest possible view.

• Perfectionist- A propensity for being displeased with anything that is not perfect or does not meet extremely high standards.

• Phobia- They have a severe form of fear when it comes to this one thing. (Dark, Spiders, Cats, tight spaces, etc. List specific phobia.)The Phobia List.

• Practical- Level-headed, efficient, and unspeculative. No-nonsense. (can double for a merit)

• Precarious- Dependent on circumstances beyond one's control; uncertain; unstable; insecure.

• Predictable- Easily seen through and assessable, where almost anyone can predict reactions and actions of said person by having met or known them even for a short time.

• Proud- Filled with or showing excessive self-esteem, and will often shirk help from others for the sake of pride.

• Rake- An immoral or dissolute person, acting without moral restraint, who defies established religious, social, expected precepts; a freethinker.

• Rebellious- Defying or resisting some established authority, government, or tradition; insubordinate; inclined to rebel.

• Reckless- Heedless. Headstrong. Foolhardy. Unthinking boldness, wild carelessness and disregard for consequences.

• Remorseless- Without remorse; merciless; pitiless; relentless.

• Rigorous- Rigidly accurate; allowing no deviation from a standard; demanding strict attention to rules and procedures.

• Sadist- The deriving of sexual gratification or the tendency to derive sexual gratification from inflicting pain or emotional abuse on others. Deriving of pleasure, or the tendency to derive pleasure, from cruelty.

• Sarcastic- A subtle form of mockery in which an intended meaning is conveyed obliquely.

• Sadomasochist- Both sadist and masochist combined.

• Skeptic- One who instinctively or habitually doubts, questions, or disagrees with assertions or generally accepted conclusions.

• Seducer- To lead others astray, as from duty, rectitude, or the like; corrupt. To attempt to lead or draw someone away, as from principles, faith, or allegiance.

• Senile- Showing a decline or deterioration of physical strength or mental functioning, esp. short-term memory and alertness, as a result of old age or disease.

• Scoundrel- A wicked or evil person; someone who does evil deliberately.

• Selfish- Concerned chiefly or only with oneself.

• Self-Martyr- One who purposely makes a great show of suffering in order to arouse sympathy from others, as a form of manipulation, and always for a selfish cause or reason.

• Self-righteous- Piously sure of one's own righteousness; moralistic. Exhibiting pious self-assurance. Holier-than-thou, sanctimonious.

• Shallow- Lacking depth of intellect or knowledge; concerned only with what is obvious.

• Smart Ass- Thinks they know it all, and in some ways they may, but they can be greatly annoying and difficult to deal with at times, especially in arguments.

• Soft-hearted- Having softness or tenderness of heart that can lead them into trouble; susceptible of pity or other kindly affection. They cannot resist helping someone they see in trouble, suffering or in need, and often don't think of the repercussions or situation before doing so.

• Solemn- Deeply earnest, serious, and sober.

• Spineless- Lacking courage. Cowardly, wimp, lily-livered, gutless.

• Spiteful- Showing malicious ill will and a desire to hurt; motivated by spite; vindictive person who will look for occasions for resentment. Vengeful.

• Spoiled- Treated with excessive indulgence and pampering from earliest childhood, and has no notion of hard work, self care or money management; coddled, pampered. Having the character or disposition harmed by pampering or over-solicitous attention.

• Stubborn- Unreasonably, often perversely unyielding; bullheaded. Firmly resolved or determined; resolute.

• Squeamish- Excessively fastidious and easily disgusted.

• Superstitious- An irrational belief arising from ignorance or fear from an irrational belief that an object, action, or circumstance not logically related to a course of events influences its outcome.

• Tactless- Lacking or showing a lack of what is fitting and considerate in dealing with others.

• Temperamental- Moody, irritable, or sensitive. Excitable, volatile, emotional.

• Temptation- They have something that tempts, entices, or allures them, that is hard to resist. This could be anything, and can drive the character to do things of ill nature.

• Theatrical- Having a flair for over dramatizing situations, doing things in a 'big way' and love to be 'center stage'.

• Tongue-tied- Speechless or confused in expression, as from shyness, embarrassment, or astonishment.

• Timid-Tends to be shy and/or quiet, shrinking away from offering opinions or from strangers and newcomers, fearing confrontations and violence.

• Troublemaker- Someone who deliberately stirs up trouble, intentionally or unintentionally.

• Ugly- Very unattractive or unpleasant to look at; offensive to the sense of beauty; displeasing in appearance. Uncomely, unsightly, unlovely, homely.

• Unlucky- Marked by or causing misfortune; illfated. Destined for misfortune; doomed.

• Untrustworthy- Not worthy of trust or belief. Backstabber.

• Unpredictable- Difficult to foretell or foresee, their actions are so chaotic its impossible to know what they are going to do next.

• User- A person who uses something or someone selfishly or unethically.

• Vain- Holding or characterized by an unduly high opinion of their physical appearance. Lovers of themselves. Conceited, egotistic, narcissistic.

• Weak-willed- Lacking willpower, strength of will to carry out one's decisions, wishes, or plans. Easily swayed.

• Withdrawn- Not friendly or Sociable. Aloof.

• Whore- Harlot. A prostitute, a person who is considered sexually promiscuous, considered as having compromised principles for personal gain.

• Zealot- An excessively zealous person; fanatic.

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