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by myungwife
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I can’t say anything, my heart aches too much. The miracle of you is but a fantasy. The last image I have of you seems only to be in my memories. I still wonder if you’re watching over me from afar.
Even if I regret, it doesn’t matter. It’s too late, I can no longer see you.
There aren’t any wounds, but why do I hurt so much? This uncontrollable sadness keeps growing. Time has passed by slowly. I try looking for you but your traces are erased. My last memories of you are locked in the rims of my tears.
Why did you leave me alone in this cruel world?
As I think of you I try hold it all in. But the tears keep falling. The memories we wrote are still in my heart. No matter how hard I try, I can’t erase them.
I'm sorry that I couldn’t say those words, even though you were by my side.
Can’t you say those words again? Please. Tell me you love me.
I still can’t get over you. I start to cry every time I think of you. Of us.
Why do I have to go through all this pain? My tears flow down and soak my dry lips.
I miss you. I need you.
Not a second passes by when your'e not on my mind. I wish I could rewind time back to when we were happy together, just the two of us.
Your love was always pure, you treated me as your own.
Our time together seemed all too short. I now feel so alone, so broken and empty inside. It's as if my heart has been shattered into millions of pieces.
Just end it now, end me.
If you not here next to me, what’s the point?
I will follow you there. Follow your footsteps along a never ending road as I try to find you. But I’m afraid I’ll lose you again.
I just want to be with you. In your arms. I wish you were here to tell me that everything was fine.
I want be courageous and follow my heart.
I love you.
Thank you for teaching me the way to love.
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i haven't written in a long time and this is my first time writing something angst. i hope you liked it? it's not the best story i've written, i'm actually somewhat disappointed. it didn't really turn out the way i wanted it to. some feedback would be nice though. to tell me how i can improve and become a better writer.
thanks for reading. ^^
love, myungwife.
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Anggie on says about chapter 1:
I like it. Agree with the first comment, you captured the emotions very well. Thank you for sharing this with us :)
cynical_innocence on says about chapter 1:
This was nice.. abstract in a way and it totally described my thoughts right now o.o
PyaariSammu on says about chapter 1:
Those were some interestting thoughts (:
deadbodies on says about chapter 1:
That was nice.
theniceslytherin on says about chapter 1:
I thought this was a good example of stream of consciousness, and felt that you captured the emotions in losing a loved one very well (: I particularly liked the anonymity of the story, as well as how vague it was. I felt that added quite a bit to it!
Great work!
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