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The Lake ★
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by smileysgoboing
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Wherever her skin touches his, ice spreads, cold and numbing. It creeps from his hands, his lips, from his feet where they touch the water, all the way to his heart until it is no longer his.
Foreword
Something I wrote for an English assignment; also posted on AFF (starring JongSica).
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Anggie on says about chapter 1:
Wow. That was great. Nicely written, too. Good job!
loveynovy on says:
Love it! :)
-flowerbird on says:
wow!
This is really good to bad is one shot
flowersea on says:
congrats!
this is really good
angelicsmile on says about chapter 1:
Nice story ^^
PyaariSammu on says about chapter 1:
That was WONDERFUL! It had the perfect touch of dark and I loved it!!!
N1ghtshade on says about chapter 1:
This was brilliant. It had that hint of creepiness and mystery that always draws me in.
I loved it! ^^
stanleyunique on says about chapter 1:
OH MY GOSH. That story is just too good. Yes~ I wish you'd make a full fanfic out of that. it was just...brilliant. YOU HAD BETTER RECEIVED A PASSING GRADE FOR SUCH A TALE. Wow. Poor Jonghyun, wrong place wrong mother freaking time. shame. =/
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