7 Razor Wings ★ Completed!

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Anggie  on says about chapter 1:
I agree. People tend to forget that everyone can be a victim of domestic abuse, either verbally or physically, or even both. Not only women and children, but men, too.
I like this, you're such a talented writer :)

skoo78  on says about chapter 1:
We sometimes forget that men are also victims. Domestic violence happens to anyone. Thank you for this writing this piece.

PyaariSammu  on says about chapter 1:
I love how this was written and how you portray domestic violence in this, simply wonderful

creamson  on says about chapter 1:
Now I know what the great comments are all about. You have placed the violence not that much given attention into a beautiful work of art. And I totally agree with everything here.

This will be forever bookmarked in my laptop.

orchidsplash  on says about chapter 1:
yes, domestic violence is never okay.
and i do agree that men have it worse off in not being able to admit they have been abuse.
and that is what has society corrupted the mind with assuming things to be.
that was well written and the descriptions of everything really painted the picture in my head.

chessur  on says about chapter 1:
Wonderfully written. I'm glad I decided to check the featured story. I commend your take on this subject, showing a side that is often not shown at all, or forgotten.

carlyxoxorenee [mod]  on says about chapter 1:
This is beautiful in the most dangerous way. It's beauty is deceptive. Beautifully written, such poise even when describing an awful subject. Great job. :)

N1ghtshade  on says about chapter 1:
Wow, anything I put here would not describe how amazing this piece of writing is.
You're such a talented writer! ^^

stanleyunique  on says:
Congratulations on getting this featured. You tryly deserve it.

Tsuyukii  on says about chapter 1:
;o; Why did I not bother to find and read this beautiful work of art? And also, I love the message behind it considering how true it is. Since men are typified as the stronger gender they may have more issues with speaking out about the woman abusing him, and possibly even if he does speak out, others may not believe him because they see the smaller, "fragile" woman figure next to his larger, "sturdier" male and they don't think the abuse possible.

GIMME YOUR AWESOME WRITING SKILLS. /sob OTL

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