Review one | Cigarette Smoke |

"Sometimes we believe it's better when we're alone."

Name of Story: Cigarette Smoke.

Author: lostreader.

Genres: Angst, Drabble.

Characters: Narrator.

Rating: 4.5 out of 5. I don't read drabbles very often, but I really enjoyed this one!

Review + Notes:
Cigarette Smoke was a drabble about, well, smoking. I've got a lot of family that smoke, so it was an interesting read! It was short, but it gave good details. I've got a couple notes for a few parts, so let's get to that!

"...just until I finish my own cigarette." - I felt the beginning was in past tense, so this part was kind of out of place for me(?). You could replace "finish" with "had finished" and I feel it would fit the tense form a lot better. If this isn't the case, I would change the verb tense at the beginning to fit the tense you're using for the rest of the story! ^^
"I could finally enjoy peacefully," - There should be an it after the word enjoy, because the narrator could enjoy WHAT now? (:
"going on my nerves" - It should it getting instead of going.
"I broth cigarette to my lips and leaned at the cold wall" - Broth isn't the word I think you're trying to use since broth means a soup based of stock or a liquid bacteria grows in. The word I think you wanted was brought. Also, at should be against. At doesn't work in that part of the sentence, but against would. ~
"in the tick air of the night" - I'm going to assume you we're trying to spell thick! ^^
""rain was just perfect" - THE rain was just perfect.
"Feeling I had waited for" - THE feeling I had waited for. 
"few more smokes" - A few more smokes.
"The final feel I waited for" - Sounds like something a fangirl would say on Tumblr, haha! It should be "feeling I had waited for" rather than what you had put.
"for who knows what time, how slowly it would disappear" - "what time" should be replaced with "how long" as well as placing the word "at" before how.
"Sigh escaped my lips and I put hood on my head." - A sigh excaped my lips, and I put my hood on my head.

Overall, I absolutely loved this drabble. It wasn't a novel but it wasn't something my five year old self would call a story, haha. (x You don't have to take my notes and use them, it's just my brain and what sounds right to me. I really loved it, though. I just cannot with your details - - I could feel the rain. I could see the smoke in the air. It was grand!~ I hope to get to read more of your works, please feel free to come get me to review anything you write! I would love to. ♥