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You're so perfect, always at the top of every class and talented at everything you do - sports, music, art. You're the girl everyone wants to be, the girl everyone both envies and admires.
Yet how did you end up like this? Fresh scars line your arms and tears flow down your face. Dark thoughts consume your mind and all these what ifs, if onlys.
Why do you keep striving for perfection when you're already there? Why don't you realize how beautiful you are?
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wonderwall on says about chapter 6:
all of your works are so beautiful and well-written. i really really love it! < 3
LizDreamland on says about chapter 2:
Good story author nim~!! Hwaiting~
RainbowHeart on says:
I clicked into this because of the title. It made me pictured beautiful things-your words, I mean. Keep writing please!!! :)
meticulous on says about chapter 3:
I love these. You write really well. My favorite is definitely the second one <3;; /creying
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 4:
You write so well. These poems/drabbles are so, so good! You don't use much words but they turn out really nice because I'm able to visualize it all in my head. The pictures are very pretty. I especially like the line from the second one: "We may be broken, but not beyond repair". I don't want to come off as weird but I seriously /did/ see light over there.
So yeah. You write really well.
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