Author's note 3

by TheDormouse
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Hello dear readers,

 

I have been busy extracting the mistakes I made in the meanwhile. 

It's actually easy to spot mistakes if you had a time off of the script.

Now I have a dilemma. It's bad to use two times in the same story and as always I mixed a lot of present simple with past tenses. 

Also I can't discard present tenses out of dialogs.

So I wanted to know if you rather have everything present tenses or anything but dialog in past tenses.

( For those without html codes, like me: http://www.fanficoverflow.com/poll/aff_view/34 )

Please tell me, I am kind of anxious when correcting mistakes.

(You all read around 16000 words up until now. o-o //without author notes of course//)

 

Sincerely yours,

 

TheDormouse

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Minerva  on says about chapter 12:
so nice~ :-D .magic or non magic, still the best! really really really looking forward.please update ><

nightlife6081  on says about chapter 8:
This story is really good so far! Looking forward to more~

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