Sisters ★
by TheDormouse
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Alice, Jenice, John aka Bright, Al, Gwen, Arnold, unknown figure
Description
The story is going to be about two sisters and what they had to go through.
In this story is going to be a serialkiller and magic.
But it's mostly about character development.
The names are chosen at random. I am sorry if they don't appeal Q~Q
I'll be using random images. And the creators of them deserve the credit.
Warning: not so harsh scolding and not so proper expressions. But it isn't that bad, really.
(I just don't want to have problems with the moderators for my choices x-x)
EDIT1: different approach of chapters
EDIT2: I made some corrections and added somethings here and there and uploaded a new chapter finally :D
EDIT3: I updated chapter 9, which I uploaded the day before today :I
EDIT4: I updated chapter 12
EDIT5: I am correcting my mistakes. Chapter 1 is done and 2. And 3. And 4. And 5, in the meantime I already made the full story of 16300+ words into a 16600+ words story of 13 chapter xD and still not finished.
And 6 and 7 and 8 and 9, merged 10 and 11 together into 10, and 12 now 11, and 13 now 12, 17100+ words.
EDIT6:
WORD COUNT: 18685
Foreword
Alice and Jenice are sisters. They love each other a lot and would do anything for each other. They live in the Bronx, which isn’t easy. But they have to because their father is a drunk and spends all the money. They don’t have enough money to go to school, even though their mother tries to work her butt off. Most of their earlier years were spend playing with the neighbours’ children. When one day John said he had to go to school. They had a lot of question about what school is. He said he would come back after class and tell them. ‘Class’ was another word that they couldn’t identify. When he came back from school he taught them what he had learned. So they had learned how to read and write. Alice’s favourite lessons were history and English, while Jenice’s favourite lesson was maths.
Their ‘school time’ didn’t last long, because John was taken up in a gang when he was sixteen years old, which was older than normal. He was given the nickname Bright and everyone had to call him that from that time. He was forced to take a tattoo with the gang’s logo. That day he swore that no one had to lay a finger on Alice and her sister. He kissed them on their forehead and showed them a tattoo on his chest. It was a heart with wings and two crowns. And above the heart was a white ribbon saying: ‘Alice and Jenice’. The letters were swirly and small middle-aged letters underneath the heart said: ‘my angels’. Alice was fourteen at that moment and Jenice was thirteen. They didn’t talked much after this, but wrote letters in their own code.
All children in the Bronx face different problems, if it wasn’t for Bright, they would have been recruited as sex objects of the gang or as drugs transport. No that a problem has faced away, new problems could show up. Which ones would they face?
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Minerva on says about chapter 12:
so nice~ :-D .magic or non magic, still the best! really really really looking forward.please update ><
nightlife6081 on says about chapter 8:
This story is really good so far! Looking forward to more~
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