First Segment

by Pastelsky and chocopretzels |
Tags   angst   sliceoflife   originalcharacter   depression   | Report Content

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I could hear her screams.


It echoed all throughout the room. They took her away. They took her away.

They took the only light left in my life.

I am not sure which screams were louder: mine, or hers?

 

 

 

I could hear their laughs.

 

I hear it everywhere I go.

They mock me.

They slap me.

They ridicule me.

 

 

 

Their actions are nothing now.

 

It may be taunting.

It may be deafening.

It may be redundant. 

But everything is only laughable.

Fools are trying to fool other fools.

Who would not laugh at that?

 

 

 

The lady is looking at me sympathetically.

 

She thinks I'm crazy. She wants to send me away.

But I did nothing wrong. All I ever do is laugh. 

But she thinks it is odd.

Then again, who cares about what she thinks?

I am a free man.

She cannot make me leave this place of memories.

 

 

 

Those people threw me in.

 

I was forced into a spacious room.

Words of  "comfort" were spoken.

But those people know nothing.

They think they understand us.

They think their actions are recommendable.

To be completely realistic, they are not assisting anyone by transporting us to a suffocating house.

It only makes us impossible to handle.

 

 

 

Everyone here is like me.

 

We all laugh.

We laugh at the birds taking off.

We laugh at the polished marble floors.

We laugh at the clear blue skies.

We laugh at each other. 

Everyone must have lost a loved one.

 

 

 

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splash  on says:
Wow. Gold. Pure gold! I'll be waiting for your next update. :)

creamson  on says about chapter 1:
Hi,
I just want to say how the first chapter stirred different emotions from me. I couldn't place them--even name what among those emotions override the others.
But I'll be waiting for these 'segments'.

Thank you for this.

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