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Second Segment

by Pastelsky and chocopretzels |
Tags   angst   sliceoflife   originalcharacter   depression   | Report Content

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I found a bottle today.

 

I drank it.

It was bitter.

Then it was sweet.

It was absolutely addicting.

 

 

 

Everyone is hitting me.

 

They call me a robber.

They call me a drunkard,

They call me a psychotic man.

 

 

 

The lady is crying.

 

She wanted me to change.

She thought I had a changed.

She actually believed in the word "change."

 

 

 

Those people are talking about me.

 

Those people are talking about their failure.

Those people are talking about my failure.

Those people are talking about a new strategy.

 

 

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splash  on says:
Wow. Gold. Pure gold! I'll be waiting for your next update. :)

creamson  on says about chapter 1:
Hi,
I just want to say how the first chapter stirred different emotions from me. I couldn't place them--even name what among those emotions override the others.
But I'll be waiting for these 'segments'.

Thank you for this.

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