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Sixth Segment

by Pastelsky and chocopretzels |
Tags   angst   sliceoflife   originalcharacter   depression   | Report Content

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I don't want to do anything now that I'm back.
 
 
 
After my failed quest, I don't have the energy to move.
 
After my failed quest, I don't have the motivation to move. 
 
After my failed quest, I don't have the consciousness to move. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
My forehead is constantly creased and my lips are wounded from biting it.
 
 
 
I don't want to talk.
 
I don't want to eat.
 
I don't want to stand up. 
 
 
 
 
 
 
Those people's whispers are even louder now.
 
 
 
“What's wrong with him?”
 
“He's been like that ever since we found him half on the side of the road.” 
 
“But even if he's scarred, he shouldn't ignore everything.” 
 
“Just let him be. We're just waisting our time by looking out for him.”
 
 
 
 
 
 
I don't care anymore.
 
 
 
I'll stay the way I am. 
 
I don't care anymore.
 
They won't mind me.
 
I don't care at all.
 
 
 
 
 
 
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splash  on says:
Wow. Gold. Pure gold! I'll be waiting for your next update. :)

creamson  on says about chapter 1:
Hi,
I just want to say how the first chapter stirred different emotions from me. I couldn't place them--even name what among those emotions override the others.
But I'll be waiting for these 'segments'.

Thank you for this.

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