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When everyone has turned their back against me,
When everyone tried to avoid me,
When everyone forgot my existence.
I felt a stinging pain in my chest, my knees began to wobble
up, energy slowly got sucked out from my body.
Ever since then, coldness became my friend, my companion.
Not until he came.
My life changed, it has turned to a roller coaster ride.
He gave me hope when the world betrayed me.
His hugs made me warm again.
He taught me how to believe once more.
He changed my frowns to merry laughs.
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Iefa_San on says about chapter 1:
Haha... Is this drabbles somehow what your heart wants? LOL... Going into a house then found a door that leads to a lot of cutie guys? XD Well, if you found the house, don't forget to call me! XD
Iefa_San on says about chapter 2:
Wow.. this is interesting.. Nicely done!
coffeeplease on says:
oh my gosh write more please <33
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 6:
...This is so heartbreaking. The little boy doesn't know where his "flaw" lies (even if he has tried his best and it can't be really called a flaw) and having been told that's it not enough. And he just sees the disappointment in his mother; he wants to do better, but he's done well already. It's sad, the way you write it, he thinks so innocently, he doesn't know that he's good. It's so innocent that it hurts...
I'm sorry I wrote all that (I never know my limit) but I just wanted to say that it's very well written.
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 5:
I like these a lot! You write well. It's nice that you write random drabbles.. they turn out really nice. And I just need to say that I love this line "she became the darkness she was afraid of". It gives that sort of impact, you know?
(I'm not making sense)
But anyways, thanks for the story!
splash on says:
I like the way you write; I'll stick around for your updates :)
jj_maple on says:
Random stories sometimes turn interesting....or weird :)
please update and do you do requests?
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