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Enough. She could not it take it anymore.
Her knees buckled up and gave up. She was sitting on the cold floor, hugging her knees close. Sniffles were echoing at room. Pain was seething through her heart that has been wounded countlessly. Pain, she had always felt that, it was so familliar that she forgot how to feel other emotions. As if pain chose her, locked her in a prison where happiness cannot reach her decaying soul. Yet, she tried to break free from the darkness nonetheless all her efforts and attempts were crushed, she was betrayed. Before she knew, she became the darkness she was afraid of.
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Iefa_San on says about chapter 1:
Haha... Is this drabbles somehow what your heart wants? LOL... Going into a house then found a door that leads to a lot of cutie guys? XD Well, if you found the house, don't forget to call me! XD
Iefa_San on says about chapter 2:
Wow.. this is interesting.. Nicely done!
coffeeplease on says:
oh my gosh write more please <33
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 6:
...This is so heartbreaking. The little boy doesn't know where his "flaw" lies (even if he has tried his best and it can't be really called a flaw) and having been told that's it not enough. And he just sees the disappointment in his mother; he wants to do better, but he's done well already. It's sad, the way you write it, he thinks so innocently, he doesn't know that he's good. It's so innocent that it hurts...
I'm sorry I wrote all that (I never know my limit) but I just wanted to say that it's very well written.
EmptyPromises on says about chapter 5:
I like these a lot! You write well. It's nice that you write random drabbles.. they turn out really nice. And I just need to say that I love this line "she became the darkness she was afraid of". It gives that sort of impact, you know?
(I'm not making sense)
But anyways, thanks for the story!
splash on says:
I like the way you write; I'll stick around for your updates :)
jj_maple on says:
Random stories sometimes turn interesting....or weird :)
please update and do you do requests?
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