Desire
Rated M
by YaMoUso
Tags
yaoi
romance
shounenai
originalcharacter
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It became dark very quickly, Kaelen had proposed that I’d stayed the night at that residence.
He showed me to my room, at the same time I began to realise something.
I didn’t need to know why I wanted to be touched, I wanted to be touched by him, and only by him: “Isn’t that enough?”
“I hope you are comfortable , and I bid you a good night.” , Kaelen said and he walked towards the door.
I stopped him, by pulling his shirt. He turned around and looked at me.
“What’s wrong, Eden?”, he said while coming closer, “Are you alright?”
I kissed him on his mouth, he was surprised. “Why ,all of a sudden…”
“I don’t know, all I know is… that I want you.” ,I said while I turned as red as a tomato.
I kissed him again, my temperature was rising, and my heart started racing.
Kaelen gently pushed me on the bed, he unbuttoned my shirt, and started kissing my torso going lower and lower.
“Wah.. no.. there.. it… feels weird…” , but he didn’t stop .
“He is… my… my…”
I panted, I was breathless.
He putted a finger inside.
“Just relax, it’s going to be okay.”
It hurt a little bit. “It’s okay ,I’ll soon find your good spot.”
“Kuh!”
“Ah, there it is.”
It was really amazing, what we we’re doing , I never ad guessed nor dreamed something like this.
“Can I put it in?” Kaelen asked.
I nodded.
That was the first I ever felt such desire for someone.
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I pumped it alittle up, because I can .
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WinnieStar on says about chapter 8:
is he like a nobody to his family. poor him. guess its easy to do stuff like getting out without being asked
WinnieStar on says about chapter 4:
so his a guy that has been kissed by a guy? this is so confusing but its nice
Asian_Wannabe on says:
Aww~ This is really adorable!
asphyxy on says about chapter 13:
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<3
Kawaiii >~< ^~^ Aww.. Actually, I'm writing my own fic right now and guess what?
It's the first Rated M fic I've ever written!
Hi-5! We're in the same situation. Sort of :p
asphyxy on says about chapter 12:
KYAAAAAAAAAA!
XD
I personally think it's amazing <3
...why do I get the feeling this rated m chapter was rushed???
o.0
X-x
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