POV Prince Kaelen: At The Balcony
by YaMoUso
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yaoi
romance
shounenai
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Lady Eda seemed totally different from the last time I met her.
I looked at her as she was talking and chatting so freely with other people.
Last time she just wanted to run away from everything.
I noticed that guy next to her, they really looked alike.
Lady Eda had introduced him as her brother, he’s probably her twin.
I was rather attracted to him. He seemed a really nervous type though.
Then I suddenly saw him slip onto the balcony. Without even realizing what I was doing I followed him.
It seemed like I had a déjà vu. First I just stared at him, looking at what he was doing.
He was looking at the moon, the same thing Lady Eda did on our first meeting.
Everything was clear, I already had my suspicion when I saw both of them appear in the entrance.
He must have been the ‘Eda’ on that party. I suddenly wanted to tease him. I already could guess how his reaction would be.
“Good evening, Lord Eden, was it?”
“You are correct, Your Highness, but you can just call me Eden, because everyone does.”
I could see he became nervous and I said: ”Don’t be so nervous around me , I am not going to eat you. “
His eyes became very big, and he quickly looked down. That was enough proof for me that he was the ‘Eda’ from that time.
I whispered in his ear: “It has been a while , My Lady.”
He looked up to me, rather shocked.
“Y—Y—You –You!”, he stuttered, and he fell down while walking backwards.
I could just fetch him in time before he hit the floor.
I could feel how fast his heartbeat went.
I loosened my grip on his waist a bit so I could look at his face.
“Are you okay?”
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WinnieStar on says about chapter 8:
is he like a nobody to his family. poor him. guess its easy to do stuff like getting out without being asked
WinnieStar on says about chapter 4:
so his a guy that has been kissed by a guy? this is so confusing but its nice
Asian_Wannabe on says:
Aww~ This is really adorable!
asphyxy on says about chapter 13:
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<3
Kawaiii >~< ^~^ Aww.. Actually, I'm writing my own fic right now and guess what?
It's the first Rated M fic I've ever written!
Hi-5! We're in the same situation. Sort of :p
asphyxy on says about chapter 12:
KYAAAAAAAAAA!
XD
I personally think it's amazing <3
...why do I get the feeling this rated m chapter was rushed???
o.0
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