Morning
by YaMoUso
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yaoi
romance
shounenai
originalcharacter
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POV Eden:
I blinked my eyes,a ray of light fell on my face.
"Is it morning already?"
I rolled on my side, and I came face to face with Kaelen, he was still sleeping.
"Guh! Ah, that's right yesterday evening we....",I blushed.
I hoped he didn't wake up soon, I really didn't know how to face him.
I stared at his face, and I wished we could stay like this forever.
I snuggled against him, and I sighed.
I felt all warm and fuzzy inside, "Is this what it means to be happy?"
I listened to Kaelens heartbeat, it was slow and stable.
My eyes grew heavy again, and I fell asleep for the second time.
POV Kaelen :
I opened my eyes and I looked at Eden.
He was laying really close against me, I smiled and hugged him before I sat up.
I layed his head on my lap, very carefully, so I wouldn't wake him up.
I stroked his hair , his hair is as soft as cats furr.
"To think of it he is like a cat."
I leaned over him and kissed his cheek.
I reminiced about the past events.
"No , he's more of a princess.", I chuckled.
Eden moved, it seems he was waking up.
He sat up, rubbed his eyes, still half asleep.
"Good morning.", I said
"Good morning", he replied automatically.
He looked really cute like that, still being in a daze.
Suddenly he seemed to have woken up. "Ah, Kaelen! Good morning!", he said with a really bright smile.
It trew me of pace for a moment then I smiled, "Good morning." , and I put my hand on his head, and i ruffled his hair.
"Are you hungry? Let's eat some breakfeast."
"Sure!"
His attitude seemed to have totally changed.
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it seemed that chapter 12 was rushed? I am so sorry about that. This story is my first shounen ai/ yaoi and I have never wrote or thought about having a M-rated chapter at first. I was thinking to hard about how to write that chapter. Next time it'll be better I swear! I'll do some researche first next time...
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WinnieStar on says about chapter 8:
is he like a nobody to his family. poor him. guess its easy to do stuff like getting out without being asked
WinnieStar on says about chapter 4:
so his a guy that has been kissed by a guy? this is so confusing but its nice
Asian_Wannabe on says:
Aww~ This is really adorable!
asphyxy on says about chapter 13:
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<3
Kawaiii >~< ^~^ Aww.. Actually, I'm writing my own fic right now and guess what?
It's the first Rated M fic I've ever written!
Hi-5! We're in the same situation. Sort of :p
asphyxy on says about chapter 12:
KYAAAAAAAAAA!
XD
I personally think it's amazing <3
...why do I get the feeling this rated m chapter was rushed???
o.0
X-x
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