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Rain - The First and the Last

by BeHappy and bananamilk0831 |
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A/N: Bananamilk0813 and I will be posting the one shots we wrote in this collection. However, they will still be one-shots.

Since I probably failed to explain that, basically we will be copying and pasting the one shots we already wrote into this collection too, so there will be two of the same one shots on this site. This is just to clear things up so there's no "OMG! You plagiarizer!" business.

 

 

January 28, 2013

 

 

Dear Journal,

 

This is my first time writing...it will probably be the last too. Clearly, my condition is getting worse. Isn't that why all the nurses are avoiding eye contact with me? They murmur amongst themselves, telling one another that I'm going to die soon. That I have no hope left. My doctor has also stopped coming in. He seems to have given up on me.

Can't they see that I'm suffering? All I do all day is look out the window. There's nothing I can do. No one comes to visit me. I don't have any relatives. They're all dead.

It's all the rain's fault. If it hadn't been raining so hard that day...I would have been spared of my depression. My parents wouln't have died. Neither would have my aunts and uncles. Why did they have to take the same bus? And my parents. Why did cancer have to be in the family? Why was it passed onto me? Life if so unfair.

I'm growing weaker as the seconds tick by. I can feel it. But still, no one comes into my hospital room. 

The nurse that used to bring me my lunch is getting married soon. Why couldn't I be happy like her? While she goes out on dates, I'm stuck in this white, boring room, staring out the window. Speaking of which...it's raining again. Like the day that started everything.

Please rain, I know my time is coming. So when I die, please wash away all this sadness. Wash away the resentment I possess. Wash away my hatred, my bitterness. Wash it all away. But most of all, wash away my existance. 

And like the fire you failed to put out that day, burn this journal entry.

Thank you. 

 

Sincerely, 

Tiffany

 

 

 

 

Also, I (BeHappy) will be writing (only Author's Notes) in this color. 

Lastly, this one-shot is called Rain. "The First and the Last" is the chapter title. If you liked this particular one shot, you can upvote it by clicking on "Rain" or better yet, upvote this collection! :D

Thanks for reading~

 

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FrozenApple  on says:
great! really good

ByungKitty  on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~

bottom_rock28  on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)

bottom_rock28  on says:
Username: bottom_rock28

Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun

Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.

Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.

Genre: thriller and angst

I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe

Pastelsky  on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!

Pastelsky  on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.

There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))

To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!

To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.

Pastelsky  on says:
Can I request, please?


Username - Pastelsky

Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club

Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko

Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.

Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!


Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.

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