Time - When the Time Comes
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If any of you guys follow me on this site, you'll know that this one shot was featured. xD
I lay in the hospital bed, next to the IV drip. I watched the bag. It was still full. To think that they were injecting that stuff into me...ugh. It just sent shivers down my spine. I didn't even want to think about it.
After my lunch was brought to me, I held my phone in my hands. I ran my thumb over the call button again and again, debating on whether I should call...
Maybe not.
Would it hurt my family to know what condition I was in?
Would it hurt them to know that I was suffering from brain cancer?
Would it hurt them to know that I never told them the truth? That I told them I was in Hawaii having fun while I was stuck in the hospital in truth?
Finally, I snapped my phone shut.
No use. I was just torturing myself. My family would find out when they found out. I probably wouldn't be here anymore, but at least they would know.
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Two days later
I watched the second hand on the clock tick by. Every second was so significant. Every second took away some time from my life. The time that my eyes would be open; the time that my heart would still be beating.
Again, I contemplated on calling my family, this time, my mother.
But again, I decided against it.
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One month later
I feel myself getting weak. It's bothersome to even keep my eyes open now. Maybe...perhaps...it's time to let my parents know? The doctors still come in but I can tell they don't see me as a priority anymore, no longer a life they need to save.
I picked up my cell phone from the stand next to my hospital bed.
But, I guess I don't know what happened after that, because everything went black and all I heard was a phone clattering to the ground
And then....
BEEP.
Goodbye, world.
A/N: Update - working on a one-shot request.
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FrozenApple on says:
great! really good
ByungKitty on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~
bottom_rock28 on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)
bottom_rock28 on says:
Username: bottom_rock28
Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun
Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.
Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.
Genre: thriller and angst
I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe
Pastelsky on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!
Pastelsky on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.
There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))
To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!
To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.
Pastelsky on says:
Can I request, please?
Username - Pastelsky
Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko
Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.
Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!
Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.
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