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Underneath the Bare Sakura Tree

by BeHappy and bananamilk0831 |
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This is a sequel to Underneath the Bare Sakura Tree!

 

 

 

After returning home from Hirosaki to Tokyo with a heavy heart, it was all Misaki could do to shed tears and watch as happy couples in her neighborhood strolled by from her apartment balcony. It reminded her too much of what Eiji and she once was...once was. No longer. 

Winter came by, and Misaki slowly grew depressed. With the cold weather and lovers making snowmen outside, sharing cups of hot chocolate, she couldn't help but be reminded of Eiji again. Maybe...just maybe...Eiji would be waiting under their tree?

With a newfound hope, Misaki boarded the train down to the countryside. The rushed through the crowds of people shopping for Christmas and she finally made it to the park.

It was deserted. No one was there. With a heart full of hope, Misaki drew her red trench coat closer to her body and walked towards that one special sakura tree.

The thin layer of snow crunched under her peach colored UGG boots. They were getting soaked, but Misaki didn't care. All she cared about at the moment was if Eiji was going to somehow be there. 

The tree came into view, the bench underneath it as well. Misaki held her breath.

...No one was there. 

Eiji wasn't there.

Her love wasn't there.

Eyes welling up with tears, Misaki walked over to the bench shakily and brushed the snow off of it. She sat and let her tears - the very tears that she had been holding in all summer - flow down her cheeks. And Eiji wasn't there to wipe them for her. 

She sobbed her heart out, not even bothering to cover up her ugly tears. No one was there to see her anyway.

It took Misaki a while to calm down. She turned around and faced the bench. There was a carving...a carving that she hadn't seen before. 

She traced her fingers over the engraved words.

Ito Eiji

Lover of Nakamura Misaki

He died in a car crash during the summer, coming to this sakura tree.

1994-2013

Misaki's eyes widened. How had she not known this? How had she not seen this? Why didn't anyone tell her?

Once again, tears started pouring down her face. She sighed and tried to compose herself, Well...at least I've found Eiji. He isn't lost to the world. She thought.

Eiji...

I've found you...

This is where we met, 

and

This is where our meetings will end.

You'll always be in my heart.

I've found you, finally...

....Underneath the bare sakura tree.

 

 

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FrozenApple  on says:
great! really good

ByungKitty  on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~

bottom_rock28  on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)

bottom_rock28  on says:
Username: bottom_rock28

Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun

Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.

Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.

Genre: thriller and angst

I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe

Pastelsky  on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!

Pastelsky  on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.

There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))

To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!

To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.

Pastelsky  on says:
Can I request, please?


Username - Pastelsky

Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club

Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko

Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.

Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!


Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)

fluffyrocks  on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.

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