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WARNING!
...it's not the best...
Honey sat nervously in the corner of the cafe. He fidgeted in the brown metal seat and wrung his hands together. Why was he so nervous? He was happy-go-lucky too and could defend himself with martial arts pretty well. So what was there to fear?
It was just a date. Right, He thought. A first date. WITH REIKO.
The bells jingled as the glass door to the cafe opened. Reiko stepped in and glanced around. She was looking stunning as ever...even though she was wearing a black t-shirt and black jeans. Her t-shirt had silver angel wings on the back.
Honey shot up from his seat and waved, "Reiko!" Reiko's head swung his way and he grinned at her. Don't be nervous, don't be nervous, He chanted to himself.
Reiko walked over to the corner of the cafe and Honey got up to pull out her seat for her. Once they were both seated, Honey picked up the cafe menu, "So...what would you like to have? My treat." He pushed the menu towards Reiko.
Reiko's eyebrows pinched together. What did she ever do to deserve good treatment from Honey? He asked her to come out, he pulled out her chair for her like a gentleman, and now he was treating her?
Misinterpreting Reiko's reaction, Honey quickly added, "I would recommend the chocolate cake."
Reiko nodded, still thinking about what had caused Honey to treat her well. "I'd like that."
Honey went up to the counter and put in their order. He came back with two plates of chocolate cake.
Cautiously, Reiko stabbed her slice of cake with the plastic fork. Honey chuckled and Reiko stopped mid-action. "Are you laughing at me?" She asked.
Instantly, Honey stopped. "No! I'm not laughing at you, I'm laughing because of you!" He tried to clear up his situation. As they said, people didn't judge you by your intentions. You may have a heart of gold, but so does a hard boiled egg.
Awkward silence filled the rest of the date with little chuckles here and there. Honey tried making some conversation but talking to Reiko always ended up in a dead end.
After their little date, Honey got up to help Reiko out of her seat. He held out his arms expectantly, waiting for a hug. He was looking awkward for quite a while though because Reiko didn't seem to get the message.
But instead, she leaned down and gave him a quick peck on the cheek. Honey flushed red and flipped his hair, covering his face from view.
"See you tomorrow at school!" Reiko beamed and skipped out of the cafe, leaving Honey dumbfounded.
I'm pretty sure that disappointed, didn't it?
I'm sorry, I'm not really good at writing fluff. I think the last part was rather fluffy though.
Sorry...
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FrozenApple on says:
great! really good
ByungKitty on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~
bottom_rock28 on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)
bottom_rock28 on says:
Username: bottom_rock28
Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun
Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.
Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.
Genre: thriller and angst
I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe
Pastelsky on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!
Pastelsky on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.
There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))
To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!
To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.
Pastelsky on says:
Can I request, please?
Username - Pastelsky
Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko
Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.
Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!
Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.
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