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A/N: Japanese characters alert! They aren't real people though. Just OCs. This one shot is also seperate so if you want to upvote it, you can find it under my "stories" tab
It was the first day of summer again.
Misaki took the High Speed Railroad down to the countryside from Tokyo. She made her way off the train, mounted the steps up from the underground subway station and climbed aboard a bus. Looking out the window, she saw the scenery pass by. Finally, the bus pulled to a stop at Hirosaki.
Misaki payed the bus fee and walked a couple minutes before she could see the crosswalk. There weren't many crosswalks in Hirosaki. It was a countryside, not a city like Tokyo. She crossed the street and made her way to the park where they met every year. On the first day of summer, Misaki and Eiji would meet up at the park. It was their special place.
Misaki walked across the bridge in the park and sat at the bench under a sakura tree. Hirosaki was known for their sakura trees, so how did they know where to meet up? Well, they just did, and it was the place where they had first met.
Hours passed by but there was still no sign of Eiji. Couples passed in front of Misaki as they strolled through the park. Where was Eiji?
Night began to fall, and Misaki stayed at a hotel for the night, dejected. Eiji wouldn't forget. He couldn't.
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The next day, Misaki returned to the bench under the sakura tree early in the morning and sat. Just as it was yesterday, Eiji didn't show up. Night fell once again and Misaki turned to leave the park.
Days passed but yet Misaki still waited and returned to the park everyday. The same thing continued for a week.
Finally one day, Misaki glanced up at the falling sakura blossom petals. They decorated the light, brown wooden bench and her red skirt.
Misaki stared up into the clear blue sky. She could hear couples chatting around her. Actually, she was the only one alone in the park.
Eiji...
This is where we met.
Where we would always meet every year.
But this year....you never came.
What happened?
You wouldn't forget.
This is where we met.
.....Underneath the Sakura Tree
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FrozenApple on says:
great! really good
ByungKitty on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~
bottom_rock28 on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)
bottom_rock28 on says:
Username: bottom_rock28
Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun
Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.
Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.
Genre: thriller and angst
I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe
Pastelsky on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!
Pastelsky on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.
There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))
To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!
To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.
Pastelsky on says:
Can I request, please?
Username - Pastelsky
Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko
Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.
Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!
Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.
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