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You woke up to the bright, shining sun's soft yellow and orange rays. Birds chirped outside as they twittered a sweet melody. Clouds floated across the sky in fluffy bundles of cotton candy. The gentle wind carressed the curtains of the open window.
With a soft sigh, you sat up in bed and untangled your black and brown hair. You stepped onto the floor and straightened your night gown.
Following the sweet music of the birds, you pushed open the white french doors at the other end of your bedroom and walked out onto the balcony. Leaning against the white metal railing, you let out a breath of relaxation and breathed in the crisp morning air.
You gazed out across the ocean from the balcony. The calm blue waves washed up on the shore while seagulls grazed the tips of their white wings against the water. Far away yachts dotted the body of water and kids ran around on the beach.
The corners of your lips tugged up into a smile and you turned back to go inside the house. However, you stopped short when you saw a cup of coffee and a vase of flowers on the balcony table.
Your smile widened and you pulled the chair out, settling into it gently. You sipped at the coffee and admired the flowers.
Your life couldn't get any more perfect than this.
Short but rather poetic, no?
We're sorry for the really late updates!
And to bottom_rock28, bananamilk0831...well I don't know what she's been up to. I know she's been working on your request though. She writes most of the psychological stuff. She watched too much CSI.
So, comments anyone?
And remember, any more requests are welcomed!
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FrozenApple on says:
great! really good
ByungKitty on says:
chúc mừng sinh nhật~
bottom_rock28 on says about chapter 6:
lol, then I'll wait patiently. Haha, the update was great! hwaiting!! =)
bottom_rock28 on says:
Username: bottom_rock28
Pairing (characters): Luhan and Sehun
Character Personalities: Luhan is a warm and gentle guy. He always look kind and welcoming but could also be cold and distant when he likes to. Meanwhile, Sehun is the sweet and the type of guy who always likes to please others though sometimes he could be imprudent.
Plot: Luhan and Sehun is in a relationship. They compliment each other rather well since their relationship is like give and take. But one day they would enter a fight and Sehun being rash and imprudent would like try to cheat on Luhan and the older male finds out. And being so much inlove with Sehun, Luhan finds himself killing him or something.
Genre: thriller and angst
I made a request. Thank you in advance and your other chapters were greatly written! Fighting! =D P.S. It doesn't have to be way bloody or something so that it wouldn't need to be rated m. Hehe
Pastelsky on says about chapter 5:
Oh my goodness, I imagined Prince of Tennis' Eiji as the guy here.
I like it a lot!
Pastelsky on says about chapter 4:
I didn't worry about the warning, and I still don't! I can imagine the entire scene, and neither of them were ooc at all.
There's only one, extremely small word which I hope you can change though. It's in the end, the "But instead, she leaned up" part. Can you please make it, "leaned down"? Honey is actually a few inches shorter :))
To clarify, NONE OF THIS IS YOUR FAULT. I just did not fill in the form properly. Sorry for thaaaat!
To state again, thank you for all the time and effort you put into making this! I was not disappointed at all :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 4:
...Kinda short. Could have been fluffier too.
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 3:
This is so sad...she should have called or at least left a letter. I feel bad for her parents. They basically raised her for nothing. Well, that's what I would think. i basically raised a daughter (I'm assuming it's a girl) that doesn't even care to think about how I might feel. tsk tsk.
Pastelsky on says:
Can I request, please?
Username - Pastelsky
Type - One Shot / Drabble on the anime and manga, Ouran High School Host Club
Pairing - Honey (Haninozuka Mitsukuni) and Reiko
Character Personalities - Honey is happy-go-lucky. He loves cakes and any other sweet, but he is also one of the best in karate and judo. Reiko, on the other hand, is a member of the Black Magic Club. She's unaware of her feelings, and she thinks everything is caused or should be started by a curse (either good or bad). These two are polar opposites who actually make a perfect match.
Plot - Anything fluffy :) First date? Marriage Day? Slice of Life? I'm great with anything!
Thank you for everything! Your other chapters were so well done, so I trust you :)
fluffyrocks on says about chapter 2:
P.S. Judging hard. lol.
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