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How to make a sandwhich
Reviewer: BeHappy
Title (10/10pts): ROFL this had me rolling on the floor laughing! Clearly a crackfic.
Graphics/Trailer (5pts): N/A
Description & Foreword (15/15pts): Self explanatory, lol. Good choice thanking all your subbies, upvoters, and people that commented!
Characters (10pts): N/A
Plot: Is it interesting? (Yes/No): *NO PLOT*
Mechanics [Grammar/Punctuation/Spelling/Syntax, etc] (20/20pts): No mistakes! :D
Flow (10/10pts): Your sandwhich steps made sense. xD
Visual things (10/10pts): Print size was perfect!
Ending (15/15pts): MUHAHAHA LEMME EAT MA HARD EARNED SANDWHICH
Bonus (5/5pts possible): Awes0me crack fic!
Extra Comments/Notes/Author's Comment:
I'm sorry this took such a long time! I was in a very intense math course.
Total: 85/85
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ByungKitty on says:
happy late birthday~ :3
snowflakes on says:
I've request a review for my story, thank you! :)
jj_maple on says about chapter 7:
Thanks for your review ^^
I didn't mind waiting at all.
yingjumeihua on says:
I requested for one of my stories.
lostreader on says about chapter 6:
omg, I don't think I ever got such high score *^*
Thank you for the review and I don't mind waiting! :D
I'm going to credit now :3
FTisland_BigBang on says about chapter 5:
tnx! I'll try to improve it :) did I put report? @_@ I just rwalize that... Thanks again :)
lostreader on says:
I requested :3
sleepwalker on says about chapter 4:
No way! I've never received a score that high before LOL (probably because I rarely request reviews). Thank you for taking the time to review my story. May I ask you something? Did you think my chapters were too short?
Ah, I'm glad I could show you a different perspective on capitalization of story titles. And lol Snoopy is great xD I just found it random haha
Again, thank you for the review! I'll make sure to request in the future.
mafalda on says:
Requested~! :D
Cremeplan42 on says about chapter 1:
Want to add another reviewer to the list? LOL. I want to apply.
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