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Title: 一百。// one hundred chances at romance.
Author: -sarang
Chapters: TBA
Status: Ongoing
Reviewer: byzelo
Plot and Originality: (17/20)
Interesting plots, I would say. Very original too, I don't really find any cliché ones. I keep feeling as if it screamed out to me asking me to read it. If this were to be a completed fic, with 100 chapters, I wouldn't stop reading as soon as I start on the first chapter until I finish all 100 chapters! Judging on your current posted chapters, I can tell the future ones will be as awesome as well! However, because there were so many different plots, I couldn't remember each and every plots.
Characterisation: (15/15)
Since it's all different OCs, there were a wide range of personalities. You did not directly reveal the characters' personalities and I really, really liked that. You leave the readers to guess how the characters really are, but your main focus weren't on the characters or their personalities or anything related, but rather, on the story flow, so a full mark in this category.
Flow: (11/15)
As for chapters that are less than 1000 words long, not fast at all. You explained every details neatly, as it only focus at one point of the story, or a scene. It's really awesome you're able to explain the scene this well!
However, the 100 words chapters... To be honest, I don't really fancy it. Maybe because it's so short and looked kind of rushed, although I think you didn't intend to make it appear that way. It doesn't really make sense(?), in a way... Sorry to say, I mean I love your writing and your short chapter but I just go through it briefly...
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: (25/25)
There's no mistakes at all, well, not that I noticed any anyway... I'm a grammar nazi but seriously, I couldn't find any visible mistakes.
Vocabulary: (5/5)
Your vocabularies used, oh my. I'm going to go cry in a corner. They're all so good and deep! You clearly have a wide range of vocabularies and you understood how they're used as well! They really made your stories delivered well.
Bonus Points + Overall Enjoyment: (4/5)
So far, I haven't had any stories that really catch my full attention and makes me want to remember the whole scene. However, all the stories were very enjoyable and I would be back to read it all over if I were to need some inspiration for writing stories.
Total: (90.5/100) | Grade: B+
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simulacrum on says about chapter 29:
Thank your for the review! And it's alright if it's late... I'm in no rush plus I understand that you have a life behind your computer! ^O^ I'm glad that I improved (even by a little bit) but there's still room for more and I'll try to strive perfection next time (not like I've been already trying to... but you get what I mean XD)! >:D And for the biological matter, you're right about how she learned that from her studies... I've seen a lot of kids around her age (rl) who knew big words like those (they're the studious kind) so I used that inference in my story! ^-^;;
--SandremSHADE__ on says about chapter 27:
Today i got the oneshot and it is splendid! Thanks a lot for the oneshot and I absolutly love it. No need for sorry, it got mended. And the story was awesome. Thanks once again^^
simulacrum on says about chapter 26:
I requested again! I wanted to see how much I improved my story for Warmth~ kekeke I have my fingers crossed XD
--SandremSHADE__ on says:
I requested once again. Plz do the fic as quickiy as possible. Thnx.
IFeelGood on says about chapter 16:
may i ask, how long does it take to write a chapter for this 'story'? you write really long and helpful chapters
--SandremSHADE__ on says about chapter 25:
Can u plz do my story a little quickly? I kno tht u hav a lyf outside this site n stuff but i can't wait 4 long! Hope u kindly get my words. I'll b waiting 4 my story. Thnx.
daeguknamahForever on says about chapter 2:
I requested.
simulacrum on says about chapter 25:
Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it :) When I saw those errors it made me really think: "I reviewed it so much, how can this happen?!" well, maybe I wasn't careful enough OTL I'll fix my story, and maybe then I'll actually bring you tears ;D lol I wish.
applecyanide on says about chapter 2:
Hello, hello, hello. I requested for a review. Just as a warning, since this story was meant as a fanfiction for a specific fandom, it might be confusing for some readers who have never heard of the story (Naruto). So, I would prefer if the reviewer (whoever it is) to at least be somewhat acquainted with it. Then again, he/she doesn't have to be. You can always ask me questions if you need any clarifications, and there's always the Naruto wiki page. I just hope that because the story may be lacking a few background info (cause fans usually hate reading that when they already know /everything/), you guys won't deduct points or anything. I'm just looking for a critical review of my writing, nothing else. Okay, that was kinda long. Sorry! And thank you!
-serendipitous- on says about chapter 2:
I've applied as a reviewer.
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