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Foreword/Description (0/10) - Is it well-written? Does it have a 'hook' that draws me in? Does it make me want to start reading?
Plot and Originality (0/20) - Is the plot interesting? Is it a good plot? Is the plot orignal or is it very cliché? Will it keep me excited and entertained as I read the story? Is it something that will forever be embedded into my memory even after I've finished reading it?
Characterisation (0/15) - Did you reveal the character's personality straight away or did you let all their qualities be revealed in due time? How did you reveal the character's personality traits? Were the traits very obvious or do readers have to draw conclusions? Did the characters have many layers? Were they relatable?
Flow (0/15) - Did the story proceed too fast or is it going too slow? Is there anything affecting the flow that is stopping the readers from drowning and getting lost in the story?
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation (0/25) - Were there spelling mistakes? Was there incorrect grammar? Was there incorrect punctuation?
Vocabulary (0/5) - Does the story consist of very basic words or words that are much more complicated and sophisticated? Do the words convey the meaning that you want readers to feel?
Bonus Points + Overall Enjoyment (0/5) - Anything good that doesn't fit into any of the above categories but deserves points for? Anything special? Anything memorable? Was the story enjoyable? Would I go back and read it again?
Total: (0/100)
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simulacrum on says about chapter 29:
Thank your for the review! And it's alright if it's late... I'm in no rush plus I understand that you have a life behind your computer! ^O^ I'm glad that I improved (even by a little bit) but there's still room for more and I'll try to strive perfection next time (not like I've been already trying to... but you get what I mean XD)! >:D And for the biological matter, you're right about how she learned that from her studies... I've seen a lot of kids around her age (rl) who knew big words like those (they're the studious kind) so I used that inference in my story! ^-^;;
--SandremSHADE__ on says about chapter 27:
Today i got the oneshot and it is splendid! Thanks a lot for the oneshot and I absolutly love it. No need for sorry, it got mended. And the story was awesome. Thanks once again^^
simulacrum on says about chapter 26:
I requested again! I wanted to see how much I improved my story for Warmth~ kekeke I have my fingers crossed XD
--SandremSHADE__ on says:
I requested once again. Plz do the fic as quickiy as possible. Thnx.
IFeelGood on says about chapter 16:
may i ask, how long does it take to write a chapter for this 'story'? you write really long and helpful chapters
--SandremSHADE__ on says about chapter 25:
Can u plz do my story a little quickly? I kno tht u hav a lyf outside this site n stuff but i can't wait 4 long! Hope u kindly get my words. I'll b waiting 4 my story. Thnx.
daeguknamahForever on says about chapter 2:
I requested.
simulacrum on says about chapter 25:
Thank you for the review! I really appreciate it :) When I saw those errors it made me really think: "I reviewed it so much, how can this happen?!" well, maybe I wasn't careful enough OTL I'll fix my story, and maybe then I'll actually bring you tears ;D lol I wish.
applecyanide on says about chapter 2:
Hello, hello, hello. I requested for a review. Just as a warning, since this story was meant as a fanfiction for a specific fandom, it might be confusing for some readers who have never heard of the story (Naruto). So, I would prefer if the reviewer (whoever it is) to at least be somewhat acquainted with it. Then again, he/she doesn't have to be. You can always ask me questions if you need any clarifications, and there's always the Naruto wiki page. I just hope that because the story may be lacking a few background info (cause fans usually hate reading that when they already know /everything/), you guys won't deduct points or anything. I'm just looking for a critical review of my writing, nothing else. Okay, that was kinda long. Sorry! And thank you!
-serendipitous- on says about chapter 2:
I've applied as a reviewer.
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